Fiction

Imagining death

From Alice Sebold's "The Lovely Bones" to Stephen King's "From a Buick 8" to Haruki Murakami's "After the Quake," post 9/11 fiction offers readers consolation, harsh truths and a glimpse of the great mystery.

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Imagining death

Innocent, decent people sometimes die terrible deaths, by chance and also at the hands of the wicked and the stupid, and where they go afterward, if they go anywhere at all, is an unsolvable mystery. This reality has always been part of the human condition, but in America at least the people who encounter it do so individually. One reason the Sept. 11 attack harrowed the nation so deeply is that it forced us to experience this cruelty and loss collectively. Some cultures know how to do this as if it were second nature — Russians and Sicilians come to mind, as of course do Jews — but they are old societies and well acquainted with grief. It’s part of the wonder of America that it refuses to accept as inevitable so many of the world’s ancient evils, but in this case the matter’s not open to negotiation; we can make life safer, but not entirely safe and to many of our most urgent questions we will get no answers.

Art is one of the ways people come to terms with this, so it’s understandable that, when seeking an articulation of our trauma, we turned to artists. Shortly after the attacks, some of the nation’s most respected novelists were hit up by publications (including this one) for written responses. At first it was surprising how often those writings seemed indistinguishable from the observations of everyone else. It shouldn’t have been, though. Fiction, especially great fiction, is a long time in the gestation; it will probably take years for the shock of Sept. 11 to work its way through the imagination of an author and emerge as a book that finally does justice to how it felt and what it meant. (And then it will take some publisher a year to put the thing out.)

In the meantime, though, during this uneasy intermediary period after the shock has worn off but before perspective gives us a clear view, we have some strangely appropriate offerings. These are books conceived, started and in some cases finished before Sept. 11, and yet they seem to speak directly to our loss.

One, Alice Sebold’s “The Lovely Bones,” is a first novel published in July that has gone on to sell nearly a million copies. (Warning, I’m going to discuss the plot and ending of this book and others, so grown-ups only from here on.) It describes the aftermath of the rape and murder of a 14-year-old girl named Susie Salmon, as told by the victim herself, from her vantage in heaven. The parallels between the novel’s premise and the disappearances of several young girls this summer is the most obviously prescient thing about it, but more than one commentator (especially in the U.K., where “The Lovely Bones” has been less warmly received than it has been in the states) has observed that the book’s success feels like it has something to do with Sept. 11 as well.

The response to “The Lovely Bones” has been like a big, collective sigh of “That’s just what we needed.” A book can take on a peculiar life of its own once it’s let loose on the world and finds its way into the hands of a wide assortment of readers. This book in particular walks a razor-thin line between schmaltz and honesty, and as Katharine Viner noted in the British newspaper the Guardian, some critics praise its “unsentimentality” while others dismiss it as “candy floss” — that’s Brit for cotton candy — and “very, very sugary.” The more popular it becomes, the more those annoying people who pride themselves on bucking every trend feel obliged to rip into it.

For me, Sebold manages to strike a balance that works, though I do think the book goes awry at the end. In the middle, there’s the convincing estrangement and separation of her parents that, at the book’s conclusion, seems to be on the way to a much less convincing reconciliation. Even worse, Sebold stoops to Hollywood-style corn when she allows Susie’s spirit to take over the body of another girl so that she can consummate her first and only romance.

This last scene violated my idea of Sebold’s contract with her readers; the rule the author had set up, I felt, was that, being dead, Susie could not in any real way touch the world of the living, and that the only growth available to her character is to let go of the traces of her life. “You have to give up on earth,” she’s told by her celestial “intake counselor.” The same person tells her, on Page 8, “You’re dead and you have to accept it.” To then allow Susie to return to life, however briefly, seemed like a failure of nerve on the part of an author who was afraid her readers couldn’t handle what is, after all, the very nature of death. Still, I liked the blend of delicacy and tartness in Sebold’s observations about ordinary, happy suburban life and how it warps in the face of tragedy, and in the final reckoning, the mawkish ending didn’t irretrievably ruin that.

Other readers, though, found a different book between the covers of “The Lovely Bones.” Instead of a parable about the adamantine wall between the living and the dead and the necessity for those on both sides to acknowledge it, they found confirmation of their own attraction to various versions of today’s popular, quasi-secular “angel” mania. Jan Jarboe of the San Antonio Express-News spoke for this audience when she wrote, “What I liked best about the novel was the idea that Susie may have been dead but her spirit was not gone. In fact, she hovered from the other side, struggling to help her loved ones cope with their loss.” Musing on friends who have lost children and yet who feel there’s still some ongoing connection, she writes, “Listening to them, I am aware of how murky and mysterious the line is between the living and the dead.”

Mysterious, maybe, but definitely not permeable — at least not as seen from across the Atlantic, where this sort of thing is seen as typical American softness and hoodoo. (A 1987 poll by American Health magazine found that 42 percent of respondants said they’d been contact by someone from beyond the grave.) Viner reports that critics there “put the book’s success down to September 11 and the consolation that, even if nearly 3,000 people were vaporised at their desks, they’re alive and well upstairs somewhere,” making a link to the attacks that, interestingly enough, Jarboe does too. There may not be a real epidemic of child abductions, she writes, but “there is an epidemic of grief … I’ve come to think that there are two separate wars on terrorism: the one across the world against foreigners who threaten our homeland, and the one taking place at home against the sickest of the sick — those who terrorize our children.”

But if pretending that death isn’t really the end may rob it of its sting, it also leaches death, and by extension life and grief, of its importance. It’s both cowardly and dishonest to insist, simply because we want to believe it, that human existence is mostly a string of Hallmark moments, occasionally tarnished by something nasty, but all resolving into an eternal, wholesome Norman Rockwell-esque Thanksgiving dinner in the end.

That’s Susie’s fantasy Heaven, yes, but even Sebold (who has told interviewers she doesn’t believe in God and isn’t sure there’s an afterlife) makes it clear that this is a child’s dream. When Anna Quindlen declared “The Lovely Bones” to be a classic of the same ilk as “To Kill a Mockingbird,” she was lumping the novel with one that most people read in their early teens, a naive take on race relations meant for young minds not yet ready to face the sometimes ugly truth. And that’s fine for children, but surely most of the readers of “The Lovely Bones” aren’t kids, even if some of them choose to read it as if they were. If submerging ourselves in the most juvenile interpretation of this (admittedly ambiguous) novel is our way of assimilating Sept. 11, then we aren’t assimilating it at all; we’re wallowing in escapism without admitting to ourselves that’s what we’re doing.

Oddly enough, the antidote I’ve found to this cant comes from Stephen King, a writer generally considered to offer a grisly breed of escapism. His new novel, “From a Buick 8,” to be published later this month, tells how a troop of Pennsylvania state troopers come into possession of a strange car that isn’t really a car — it’s a portal to another dimension. The details of the Buick itself don’t matter much for the purposes of this argument; it’s really a symbol for what the troopers know, what their job shows them about life. Likewise, though Sept. 11 isn’t dealt with explicitly (the novel was completed earlier this year), its relevance is obvious.

The troopers in “From a Buick 8″ patrol the edges of the seemingly safe world where the families in “The Lovely Bones” (oddly enough, also set in Pennsylvania) live. Sudden, meaningless death and free-floating human malevolence are things they encounter all the time on the highways. Their unending task is to keep this stuff at bay, shut up in a shed like the unholy Buick, where the threat can only be minimized, never eliminated. Then they wipe the blood off the asphalt “because John Q. [Public] and his family didn’t want to be looking at it on their way to church come Sunday morning.”

The troopers tell their story to a teenager, the son of one of their own, a boy orphaned when his father gets hit by a drunk driver while on duty. The death of Curtis Wilcox is a senseless thing, but the boy wants sense to be made of it, just as his father wanted to discover the true nature of the Buick and just as, I suppose, some readers want to be shown the redemptive potential in the murder of a 14-year-old girl. The message of “From a Buick 8″ — repeated perhaps a bit too insistently — is this: “You have to stop waiting for the punchline … the world rarely finishes its conversations.” There may be no explanations, but there’s plenty of work to be done, and “when it comes to dealing with the unknown, there’s a great deal to be said for police training.” Training won’t help when a trooper visits a former commanding officer hospitalized with Alzheimer’s disease and, in a rare moment of lucidity, the old man says matter-of-factly, “I’m in hell, you know. This is hell.” But when these men can do something to lessen the sum of the world’s distress, the training sure does come in handy.

Even though “From a Buick 8″ is a bleaker book than “The Lovely Bones,” I found it more heartening; whatever bullshit there may be in the troopers’ notion of stoic heroism, it’s functional bullshit. Their code doesn’t pretend the world is a better place than it is, but it gives them a way of envisioning their arduous lives that makes it possible for them to go on. They struggle not to wrap themselves up in a cocoon where death doesn’t matter and people are never really separated from those they love. That’s because in order to perform their small part in containing life’s horrors, they can’t afford to lie to themselves. You can be the protected child or the protecting adult, and the toughest thing about adulthood is realizing that the protection you offer can never be perfect.

Both “The Lovely Bones” and “From a Buick 8″ wrestle with the more private side of grief; for a sense of how a great writer responds to collective tragedy, there’s no better example on the “New Books” table right now than Haruki Murakami’s “After the Quake.” Murakami, a lover of Western detective novels and jazz, and a bit of a loner, had long felt like a misfit in his native Japan, but in 1995, when the country was battered by an earthquake that killed about as many people in the city of Kobe as were slain on Sept. 11 — an event followed by the terrorist sarin-gas attacks in the Tokyo subway — he returned to his homeland from a self-imposed exile in the U.S.

“After the Quake” is a collection of stories, a masterpiece of the form and a portrayal of the way a national tragedy affects people in ineffable ways. None of the characters in these stories is in Kobe or close to anyone lost there, yet the earthquake (the stories are set before the gas attack) rearranges the foundations of their lives nonetheless. And just as events that don’t directly involve us can make us feel somehow united with strangers who share our grief and bewilderment, so are the characters in “After the Quake” only superficially separated from each other.

What does it mean that the same images and themes run like filaments through all these tales? That’s impossible to say. Part of Murakami’s greatness is that he understands that the central mysteries of life can never be penetrated, only intuited and marvelled at. The numinous connections sensed between these stories is a kind of miracle, as the bonds between any human beings are. The catastrophe that destroys someone else’s life motivates us to reenvision or even change our own. Or, if we’re lucky, it shows us that, as one of Murakami’s characters puts it to another character grappling with the challenges of middle age and haunted by an old hatred, “If you devote all of your future energy to living well, you will not be able to die well … Living and dying are, in a sense, of equal value.”

And, of course, the uncanny relevances of “After the Quake” also tell us that our collective tragedy is not so different from Japan’s, or the blows absorbed by any other people since history began. That’s what the rest of the world has been trying to tell America for quite some time now: We aren’t exempt, we don’t get a special dispensation that permits us, even after death, to go back and finish what we left undone, to say a proper goodbye. Paradoxically, it is only through making an effort to die well — that is, with an honest respect for death’s finality and unknowability — that we will ever be able to live well.

Laura Miller

Laura Miller is a senior writer for Salon. She is the author of "The Magician's Book: A Skeptic's Adventures in Narnia" and has a Web site, magiciansbook.com.

50 shades of Shutterstock

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This week, for roughly the millionth time, E.L. James’ romance-bondage trilogy “50 Shades” nabs the No. 1, 2 and 3 spots on the New York Times bestseller lists. We don’t get it either. Every page of that book, which famously began as “Twilight” fan fiction, elicits a sigh of confusion and weird secondary embarrassment. The question is: Who would read this? (The answer is: Apparently everyone.) It’s the same baffled, helpless feeling we get when we sort through stock photos on a daily basis. Stock photos – which have been the subject of recent outstanding Internet satire – are used by this site, and many others, to illustrate our flood of content. Many are plain and simple, but a good portion are flat-out mind-blowing. Why did anyone think that photo was a good idea? It only made sense to join these forces. And so, we present to you passages from the most head-scratching bestseller of our time, illustrated with the assistance of inexplicable stock photography.

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Megaphone by Natalie Bakopoulos

Miracles happen, even in an Athens crippled by a garbage strike, to a young mother unsure of her ability to love

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Megaphone by Natalie Bakopoulos (Credit: iStockphoto/caracterdesign)

It’s the third week of the garbage strike and Athens has begun to smell. Bright-colored trash bags fill the curbs and alleyways, and we have learned to step over the rubbish and avoid the blocks that had become unnavigable. We know which stretches are particularly foul — a stretch along Mavili Square, or the entire top end of Monastiraki. Odos Athinas is a sea of trash, and Omonia is ghastly but we don’t go there anyway. May has gone from unseasonably cool to raging hot, and the garbage seems to be melting. In front of the museum it’s like yet another installation project. When I arrive each morning I want to wretch.

My 5-year-old son, Alekos, sits on the balcony of our apartment. Visible from there are pine trees and details of other people’s lives, audible are the sounds of morning, the birds above and voices below. Evenings, Alekos lies on the divan on the balcony in his pajamas, watching the moon. He is obsessed with it, and his father made him a playlist of all the Greek songs that mention it. When he was smaller he’d stare at the moon until he fell asleep.

This morning, though, Alekos lies flat on the ground, peering down through the slats of the railing, staring at the trash. Next to him is his iPad ­– a gift from his father, and yes, I know, but his father doesn’t live with us and what can you do?­ — and now he favors bad pop music like the older kids at school. So I’m surprised this morning when I hear the sounds of Elmo counting. He’s embarrassed by this favorite YouTube clip­­ – it’s for babies, he says ­­­­– but it comforts him. The tension these days is overwhelming.

Alekos looks up when he sees me, furrows his brow, and tells me if he were a deputy like his father, he’d force everyone to clean up the garbage. “And to make a new government,” he says.

I tell him that would be nice.

“At least I can fly,” he says. He is wearing the Spider-Man costume my sister brought him from the States.

I tell him Spider-Man jumps and leaps and sticks to things. He doesn’t fly. “Besides,” I quickly add, thinking of all the balconies around us. “You’re not Spider-Man.” Even I have wondered what it might be like to jump from one to the next. I smooth his light hair, which is growing long. “You need a haircut,” I say.

I hold out two polos, one white, one blue, so he feels he has a choice. He pulls the blue shirt over the costume, and I hope that his teachers aren’t too upset by this because I am too exhausted to argue with him.

Outside, the trash has piled up, and Alekos can’t get into the car from the curb. I tell him I’ll pull the car up so he can get in without pushing his way through the refuse. He wrinkles his nose at the smell. But when I get to the driver’s side, Alekos is no longer standing there.

Instead he is floating 12 feet above the curb, his Spider-Man-clad arms stretched out like wings.

Alekos,” is all I can say, “get down.” He swoops over to me, hovering just above my reach, and finally glides gracefully to my feet as if he has been practicing this move for months. Bending down to face him and gripping the straps of his backpack, I have the panicked feeling that if I let go he will fly away.

“How long has this been going on?” I whisper. “Tell me.”

One old man walks past us with his hands behind his back and says nothing. He barely notices us. Across the street a woman hurries along in heels, yelling into her phone. No one else is around.

Alekos shrugs, aloof, and looks away with those dark eyes, almost black, like his father’s. “I tried to tell you.”

“Does Babas know about this?” I ask, suddenly sure his father would keep this from me, just the way he failed to mention his girlfriend was staying the night, reading Alekos bedtime stories when he stayed there. Oh, the flying? I thought you knew?

“No,” Alekos says.

“Just at home, OK?” I say. I don’t want to alarm him, but I want to be firm.

He digs in his backpack and tells me he saw his father on the news that morning. This is one reason I don’t like him to watch television at all. For the rest of the drive, we’re quiet.

“I know I’m not Spider-Man,” he says finally, when we arrive.

“OK,” I say. “Do you fly at school?” I ask.

“No.” He looks at me in the rearview mirror, completely incredulous. “Nobody does.”

He gets out of the car and hurries off to meet some other kids, who admire his Spider-Man arms as if they are tattooed. I wait for him to turn around and wave but he doesn’t, and for a moment it seems his feet levitate off the ground. But maybe I am imagining it; he walks in, one foot after the other, like everyone else. I park at the metro station and take the train into the city center, turning up the ringer on my phone.

I call his father three times but get his voice mail. I text him to call me. He texts me an hour later — Ola kala? — and I trip over a split-open trash bag, as if these sidewalks weren’t already treacherous enough. I answer, Yes, everything’s fine. This will have to wait until we are face to face, which is not often.

We met when I was teaching art classes on Paros one summer. I soon got pregnant, and we didn’t get married, but I stayed in Greece. I think he still resents me for not marrying him. To be honest, I can’t even remember my reasons. It all seems like another lifetime, decades ago, when Athens felt proud and vibrant those few years after the Olympics.

A few more messages come from him but I’m busy and don’t answer. Then, when I’m outside the museum, finishing my installation, he shows up.

“You don’t call me three times in a row with no message,” he says, frustrated. “You barely call me at all, unless the kid is on fire.”

No, not fire, I think.

He surveys my project, one giant megaphone outside the  museum, the size of a kiosk, with cameras inside that will film street activity and project it onto a screen inside. Tiny figurines in various stages of undress shoot out from the megaphone, suspended by invisible wire. I’ve compiled old Greek footage of both celebrations and protests, which will air inside the museum, and the outdoor footage will be superimposed on those old clips. I wonder if anyone is inside now, watching us, or what we’re matched with: a hectic street scene, a political rally, a brilliant August moon?

“I like it,” he says, in English, in that supportive tone he uses when he doesn’t know what to say about my work but wants to convey he approves.

“Oh, stop it,” I say.

“And with the garbage,” he says. “A nice touch.”

And the two of us laugh, the first time we have laughed together in a long time, since before the elections, since before the crisis, probably not since Alekos was an infant and we marveled at every smile and uttered “word.” Suddenly I think I should have thought to make those tiny figures children, with wings. I wonder why I didn’t think of it before, why it always takes the manifestation of something so crazy to make me realize something so simple.

“Let me take you for a coffee,” he says, “or something stronger? We can sit outside, where it’s quiet.” The trash stench is so bad that everyone sits inside, smoking.

“You have time for that?” I ask, knowing he doesn’t. I can hear his phone buzzing in his pocket. “I should keep working.”

One night, right before these last elections, he came to pick Alekos up and he kissed me when Alekos went to grab his toys. “Not yet,” I said. My attempt at self-preservation while the rest of the country implodes. It’s hard enough just to be friends.

“OK,” he said then. “We’ll get there, one day.”

Now, I lean into him a moment. Together we survey what I’ve made. I want to tell him, Our son can fly. I want to tell him, Stay.

“Are we there yet,” he says quietly, distantly, not as question but statement, and he rests his chin on my head and looks out into the street: the sleepy shops, the political posters pasted over the boarded-up kiosks, the hot afternoon sun beating down on it all. “Are we?”

And then my phone is ringing­­ — it’s the school office — and I know of course what has happened. I imagine Alekos flying around his classroom like an angry bee, out into the schoolyard, beyond the trash, beyond the protests and our land in limbo. Or maybe he is more relaxed, gliding effortlessly the way I fly in my dreams, his superhero costume and sandy hair glowing in the afternoon sun, until he finds us here, his parents who don’t know where we are or where we’re going, and taking us up with him, catapulting us into the vast unknown. Our images would flicker on the screen inside, soaring above that old footage of our shattered, magnificent city.

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Natalie Bakopoulos's first novel, "The Green Shore," will be published by Simon & Schuster in June 2012. Her work has appeared in Tin House, Ninth Letter, Granta Online, and The O. Henry Prize Stories 2010, and she is a contributing editor for the online journal Fiction Writers Review.

Almost by Chris Pavone

She never thought of herself as ambitious, until motherhood and career collided in one horrifying hospital ride

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It’s just before dawn when Isabel puts the final page down on the fat stack of paper that sits on the rumpled bedspread, next to an overflowing crystal ashtray and a crumpled soft-pack of cigarettes. She’d tried Wellbutrin and Xanax; she’d used patches and gum. In the end, the only thing that made her quit smoking was being pregnant.

But then, after everything, she couldn’t help but start up again. At first it was just a single cigarette per day, or two. Then it became a few, and within months she was back to full-throttle. Over the past couple of years, she’s tried to quit a few times, but not seriously. She anticipates — she accepts — failure. Because she doesn’t want to quit, not really. She wants instead to try, and fail.

Isabel picks up the manuscript with both hands, flips it over, and uses her thumbs to align the pages. She takes a deep breath, lets out a long sigh.

Another night lying in bed, working. She’d fallen asleep at 11, then woke sometime after 2, her mind unquiet. But it wasn’t until 3 that she admitted she was awake. She then picked up a manuscript and a pencil, and started working, page after page, all through the desperate hours. Vaguely reminiscent of those days when Nicky was an infant, in the middle of the night, sleep-deprived, awake in a dormant world. The small hours when a blanket of quiet smothers the city, but through the moth-eaten holes there’s the occasional lowing of a railroad in New Jersey, the distant Dopplered wail of an ambulance siren. Then the inevitable thump of the newspaper on the doormat, the end of the idea of night, even though it’s still dark out.

She stares across the room, off into the black nothingness of the picture window on the opposite wall, its severe surface barely softened by the half-drawn shades, an aggressive void invading the serene cocoon of her bedroom. The room is barely lit by a small bullet-shaped reading sconce mounted over the headboard, aiming a beam of light directly at the top of her head, creating a halo in the reflection in the window. An angel. Except she’s not.

Isabel shuffles into the dark hall, flips the light switch. She turns on the kitchen lights, and the coffee — switched from auto-on, which is set to start brewing an hour from now, to on — and the small television on the counter. Filling the lonely apartment with humming electronic life.

The coffee machine hisses and sputters, big plops falling into the tempered glass. She watches the contraption’s clock, changing from 5:48 to 5:49. Grabs the plastic handle of the carafe and fills the mug with hot, viscous, bitter, bracing caffeination. She takes a small sip, then a larger one.

She walks down the hall, lined with the photographs that she’d unearthed four years ago, when she was moving out of her matrimonial apartment, into this single-woman space in a new neighborhood, far from the painful memories of her home — of her life — downtown, where she’d been running into too many mothers, often with their children. Women she’d known from the playgrounds and the toy stores and the mommy-and-me music classes, from the gyms and grocers and coffee shops, from preschool drop-off and the waiting room at the pediatrician’s. All those other little children growing older, getting bigger.

So she’d bought herself a one-bedroom in an uptown full-service building, the type of apartment that a woman chooses when she reconciles herself that she’s not going to be living with another human being, probably forever. That she’s making her loneliness comfortable. Palliative care.

She lined this nice new hallway with framed photos. There she is, herself, a smiling little toddler. And with her mother on the first day of second grade. At college graduation with her two best friends. There are her grandparents, at the final family reunion before they both died, within weeks of each other. Isabel in a big white dress, aglow, in the middle of the panoramic-lens group shot. A much smaller print, lying in a hospital bed, beaming at Nicky in her arms, tiny and red and angry in his swaddling blanket and blue cap. A grainy shot of herself onstage in a little black dress, accepting an award, beaming again, but not as wide. Some joys aren’t as joyous as others.

It was more than possible — it was inevitable — to blame herself, her ambition, even though she’d never thought of herself as especially ambitious. But everyone has important moments, in any job, at any level of ambition. In the Supreme Court or a fourth-grade classroom, on an assembly line or a fishing boat, there are crucial days.

For Isabel the literary agent, this day was dominated by an auction she was running for a hotly anticipated second novel, whose author needed a lot of hand-holding, and whose bidders kept increasing their offers every half-hour, from mid-five figures to high-sixes in the course of the day. This lucrative 9-to-6 was followed by a 7 o’clock black-tie that included an honor for, and an interminable speech by, a different author of hers. So this frantic day, it featured a wardrobe change. And the evening portion was just as important work as the daytime; just because there was liquor and food and fancy dress didn’t mean it wasn’t work.

The nanny called a couple times during Isabel’s 16 hours at work, worrying that Nicky’s cold or flu or whatever was getting worse. Dave was away on a business trip, and Isabel didn’t want Lupe to be the one to go to the doctor with Nicky; the nanny’s English would be generously described as weak, and sometimes that mattered. So Isabel made an appointment for first thing the next morning. Anyone would’ve done the same thing.

Isabel returned home after midnight, exhausted. She thanked Lupe and sent her home in a taxi, and let her cocktail dress fall to the floor, and collapsed into bed.

She was awakened at dawn by the screaming. Nicky was burning up, 106. She rushed downstairs with the boy in her arms, and ran around the block, panting and desperate, until she found a taxi.  “Don’t worry, Sweetie,” she said. “We’ll be at the doctor’s in a minute.” The hospital was only a mile away.

The taxi peeled away from the curb, the eerie blue light washing over the dingy white garbage trucks, the Mexican kids swabbing down the sidewalks in front of all-night delis, the street-cart vendors positioning their pastries in front of office buildings, the joggers with reflective stripes down their shorts, the normal business of a city’s day starting, coming to life.

“Are we there yet?” Nicky asked, as he had so many times. From the back seat of the shiny SUV that was cleaned every week by the guys in the garage, on their way out to the weekend house in East Hampton, back when her life looked like something to be envied. He had said it on the way to visit Dave’s parents in Oyster Bay, or hers upstate in the Hudson Valley. While heading to Vermont, for a ski weekend; to Cape Cod, to visit friends; to the Bronx Zoo and the Brooklyn Aquarium, Yankee Stadium and Citi Field. It was something the little boy asked, all the time.

But this was the last time.

In the back of the moldy-smelling taxi she pushed the fever-damp hair off her son’s hot forehead. “Nearly,” she said. He shut his eyes, and then slipped silently into a coma, there on the slippery silver vinyl seat of the taxi.

An hour later, Nicky was dead. A supervirus, said the young doctor, who had been up all night, up for who knows how long, working; he was tired and frustrated, and perhaps not as tactful as he could’ve been.

At the end of the hall Isabel stops at the spotlit photograph, a small black-and-white in the center of a vast expanse of stark white matting. A little boy, her baby, laughing on a rocky beach, running out of gentle surf, holding a little toy hammer. Isabel reaches her hand to her lips, plants a kiss on her fingers, and transfers the kiss to the little boy. As she does every morning.

There was, the doctor added, almost nothing she could’ve done. Almost.

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Memorial Day fiction: Are we there yet?

Salon exclusive: At the start of the summer fiction season, new stories from Chris Pavone and Natalie Bakopoulos

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“Are we there yet?”

It’s a dreaded sentence. When it’s spoken by an anxious child from the back seat, it’s enough to make stressed-out parents wish they’d never taken a family vacation in the first place. And even if it’s delivered as a sing-songy punch line, from an impatient partner or spouse on a long road trip, it’s an irritating eye-roller of a joke.

So this Memorial Day weekend — the unofficial start of the summer vacation season, and therefore the summer fiction season — we asked two novelists to reclaim the sentence in a new and adult context. For our latest fiction project, there was only one simple rule: Each story had to include the line “Are we there yet?” in a fresh and surprising way.

Our authors are two people you should be taking to the beach with you this summer. Chris Pavone is the author of “The Expats,” the New York Times best-selling thriller with more satisfying twists than the Pacific Coast Highway. Natalie Bakopoulos is the author of “The Green Shore,” one of 2012′s most anticipated debut novels, a beautiful family drama that is set during another Greek crisis — the 1967 military coup.

To read the stories, just follow the links below:

“Megaphone” by Natalie Bakopoulos

“Almost” by Chris Pavone

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David Daley is the senior culture editor of Salon.

“Frankenstein” remixed

This masterful new adaptation of Mary Shelley's classic novel may be the best interactive fiction yet

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This originally appeared on The Chimerist, a site devoted to the intersection of art, stories, and technology.

Whatever interactive fiction is (and we’re still figuring that out) it suffers from all the problems of traditional fiction and then some. The vast majority of novels and short stories aren’t much good, but when a branching fiction — along the lines of the old “Choose Your Own Adventure” children’s books — fails to engage, the first impulse is to blame the form rather than the content. Let “Frankenstein,” just released by Inkle Studios and Profile Books, serve as a reproach to that reflex. The app is a creative, subtle and sensitive adaptation of Mary Shelley’s classic novella, and it has singlehandedly renewed this critic’s hopes for interactive fiction.

What this “Frankenstein” isn’t is a replication of the source text with the addition of a lot of digital doohickeys like sound effects and illustrations that animate when tapped. The app is all about the text, even if it is beautifully framed by period art and anatomical illustrations. The reader is presented with a screenful of narration and then offered one or more responses to it. The preferred response, when tapped, delivers up another screen of text. (In an absurdly pleasing visual touch, these appear as sheets of paper fasted together by straight pins.) According to the press materials, the reader’s responses will shape the way the narrative is presented, although not to the degree of substantively changing the plot.

This is an important point. The pleasure of storytelling lies in the dynamic between the surprising and the inevitable. The reader wants to feel the story is going somewhere, that its events follow from each other in meaningful, but not too obvious ways. When a story can go anywhere, it feels meaningless. In Mary Shelley’s novella, which is saturated with the Western tradition of the tragedy, Viktor Frankenstein’s character is such that he must create a monster, and the monster’s body is such that he can never belong among human beings however much he yearns to. A “Frankenstein” that ended with either misfit finding a comfortable place in the world would be a travesty.

But that doesn’t mean the reader doesn’t long for the story to unfold otherwise; that’s the nature of tragedy. The great insight that writer Dave Morris brings to this adaptation of the novel is that while a reader cannot significantly change the outcome of the story, the interactive element can change the shading and flavor of the tale. It can be mournful and reflective or action-packed. The creature and his creator can show greater or lesser ambivalence about their own behaviors. The ambiguity of both figures is baked into Mary Shelley’s novella, and while Morris has nearly doubled the word count of the original, this mostly amounts to playing up or down what’s already there.

Morris — a novelist who has written graphic novels, games and, yes, Choose-Your-Own-Adventure stories for kids — has changed the original text in other ways, as well. (Let’s take a moment here to point out to all future narrative app developers that hiring a real writer who actually knows what he or she is doing is totally worth it.) He’s moved the setting to revolutionary France, a choice that shows shrewd understanding of the idealistic political climate that affected Shelley’s thinking; the new Republic is its own kind of Frankenstein’s monster. He’s also eliminated much of the 19th-century framing of the tale and converted it into two present-tense narrations. One is Frankenstein’s dialogue with either himself or a (possibly imaginary) companion. The other is a second-person account of the monster’s first weeks of life as it spies on a family of dispossessed French nobility and has the chance to observe the loving relationships it can never enjoy itself.

Morris presents the reader with choices I’ve not encountered in other interactive fictions. Is humanity mostly good, or mostly evil? Does the most recent development make you (the monster) feel hope or despair? Is the revolution the dawn of a brave new world or a descent into chaos and barbarity? While I’m usually skeptical that present-tense narration increases the “immediacy” of a story, in this case, it really does work, particularly in the sections concerning the monster. Depending on your own outlook, you may urge him to keep trying to connect with humanity, or promptly forward him on to homicidal rage.

In either case, the narrative is shaped not by the reader deciding to turn left or right, to go down into the cellar or to get out of the house — the usual actions offered on the choose-your-own menu. Instead, the options have more to do with personality and interpretation, beliefs and ideas. As a result of the reader’s choices, the characters seem more like him- or herself, with a concurrent ratcheting up of emotional investment. To my surprise, I found myself more moved by this adaptation of the Shelley novel than I have been by the source text. (Although the app does include the original if you want to compare and contrast.) This is the only interactive fiction I’ve ever read with that quintessential, old-fashioned readerly avidity: the hunger to know what happens next. Of course, I already knew, but that didn’t matter at all.

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Laura Miller

Laura Miller is a senior writer for Salon. She is the author of "The Magician's Book: A Skeptic's Adventures in Narnia" and has a Web site, magiciansbook.com.

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