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Going straight

Dennis Cooper's new book leaves behind the sex, violence and gore that made his reputation. Has the cult writer lost his edge?

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Going straight

Dennis Cooper, possibly America’s most subversive writer, is known for his fixation with violent gay sex, pedophilia and the dismemberment of lanky young boys by older men. This year marks a creative turning point for the literary renegade: While “The Sluts,” published this past spring, showed us Cooper at his most graphic yet, his latest novel, “God Jr.,” ushers in a PG-rated era for the writer. But can a cult hero put aside his sensational subject matter and find mainstream success?

Cooper’s classics are 1991′s “Frisk” and 1997′s “Guide,” both installments of the five-part George Miles Cycle, completed in 2000. Cooper has described the structure of the ambitious Cycle, inspired by and named for his mentally unstable high school love (Miles killed himself), as “a novel being gradually dismembered to nothing,” with each book more abstract and episodic than the one before. The Cycle made Cooper’s reputation as an incendiary writer, drawing comparisons to Burroughs, de Sade and Bataille — and attracting a frightening number of lean, very young male followers who sit at Cooper’s readings holding hands and occasionally mail him nude photos of themselves. Both “Frisk” and “Guide” feature painfully explicit scenes of sexual torture and murder: In “Frisk,” a young hustler is beaten, raped, hung from attic rafters and cut wide open; in “Guide,” a dwarf porn actor eviscerates and sodomizes a 14-year-old. Cooper’s hipster status and droll deadpan humor aside — set mainly in Los Angeles, his books take digs at trendy indie rock bands, stoners and artists — his writing packs a shock that a number of “edgy” university symposiums devoted to the author has yet to dull.

At their best, Cooper’s novels transcend the gore to become surprising, moving works of literature. This is because Cooper’s art resides not only in the extremes but, incongruously, in a kind of hopeless romanticism — as if the ghost of Miles, his frail and ultimately unknowable love, were hovering over him still. At the heart of both “Frisk” and “Guide” is a message that’s twofold, and tragic: We have to live with the fact that some of our most deeply rooted fantasies can never be fulfilled in reality, and that those fantasies may represent the worst part of us. Cooper’s scenes of brutalization — sometimes carried out by dark characters, but more often with smoke and mirrors, the vivid rendering of the protagonist’s inner life — are ultimately about the desire to know another human being, to own him so completely that you can hold his insides in your hands, and hunt for meaning in that person’s most private parts.

The bleeding of fiction and fact is signature Cooper, a master of metafiction. In “Frisk,” for instance, the narrator “D.” recounts, in vivid letters to a former boyfriend, his sex-fueled murders of a number of local prostitutes — only for the reader to learn that the whole alarming exchange was a put-on. In “Guide,” the narrator is a writer with a cult following who harbors dreams of mutilating young boys — and, incidentally, his name is Dennis. Cooper has said, both as the protagonist Dennis and in interviews, that he blurs the line between his life and his fiction for impact, and he recognizes these distressing fantasies as deriving from his childhood fascination with a group of boys who were found raped and murdered in the woods near his home in the San Fernando Valley. This merging of Cooper and his characters has created a warped mythology around not only the work, but also the author himself. The man has a reputation. This author knows a handful of hip, urban-sophisticate types — writers, editors, painters — who, in spite of their respect for Cooper’s work, steer clear of him for fear of being drugged and lured into a scene out of “Caligula.”

Considering his fierce brand of underground celebrity, it was fairly monumental when Cooper announced this past spring that “The Sluts” would be his final foray into sex and gore — a sort of last, black hurrah. The book, headed to paperback this October, would make fans of “The 120 Days of Sodom” blush.

Written as a long string of review postings on an L.A. male-escort Web site, “The Sluts” maps out a new genre of fiction: the preteen hustler mystery novel. The postings from the johns, known only by their Web I.D.s, paint a portrait of “Brad,” an elusive and deeply troubled 14-year-old (of course) prostitute who becomes the toast of the Web as “the hottest, sweetest little ass,” an “A+++++.” As older men begin to compete for time with the disturbingly submissive Brad, it becomes increasingly unclear who this boy is — and how dangerous he may be. But while this structure lends a terrific suspense to the first third of the book, it devolves into self-indulgent slasher porn in the pages that follow. When Brad’s self-styled guardian Brian announces online that Brad has decided to allow clients to indulge in radical torture sessions, set to culminate in his death at the hands of the most hardcore client, things get really, really ugly. Ugly enough to make “American Psycho” read like E.M. Forster. For instance: At one point, a john describes, with relish, the process of castrating Brad and force-feeding him his own testicles.

This is Cooper at his most repulsive yet. And whereas the characters in “Guide” were searching for beauty — albeit through heroin, child porn and a homicidal dream life — the johns in “The Sluts” are merely searching for the best fuck ever. This leaves the center of the novel hollow and cruel, just so much Grand Guignol literary theatrics. The perceived bravery of committing such horrifying stuff to print does not guarantee a challenging, literary work of art — a remarkable feat Cooper managed to pull off with “Frisk” and “Guide.” By the conclusion of “The Sluts,” Brad’s horrible, weeks-long torture and murder is proven to be a hoax, a conceptual twist — but by then, the graphic content has already taken its toll on the book, reducing it to a couple hundred pages of truly twisted porn.

Just months after “The Sluts” comes “God Jr.,” in which Cooper, as promised, abandons what he calls the “sex and violence axis.” It’s a PG-rated affair, with zero sex and lots of straight suburbanites. No more screwing and slicing up of waifish preteens — in fact, there are few kids present at all. In “God Jr.,” a middle-aged suburban couple, Jim and Bette, deal with the sudden death of their teenage son Tommy by smoking pot, avoiding physical contact, and playing lots of Nintendo. Jim devotes himself to building a monument to their son in the yard: a re-creation of a strange tower Tommy drew repeatedly in his notebook. As Jim learns, Tommy actually copied the building from a Nintendo video game, and he begins to play obsessively, trying to learn something about his son beyond his love of pro skater Tony Hawk and getting high.

The premise of the book feels forced — Jim’s predicament in particular: Out of guilt from having been the driver in the car accident that killed Tommy, Jim has unnecessarily committed himself to a wheelchair and works at a custom tailoring shop that only employs the physically and mentally disabled. This subplot featuring Jim’s co-workers’ high jinks is strained, with an absurdist humor that rings false: The shop is called, with ironic cuteness, Little Evening Out, and was founded by a one-legged Vietnam War veteran. Days at the shop are punctuated by learning-disabled Marianne’s calls to the local radio station to request songs by the Eagles. This self-conscious cleverness pops up throughout “God Jr.”: Nintendo sends a representative to determine whether Jim’s monument is an act of artistic appropriation (and therefore legal) or a form of copyright infringement; Dateline NBC wants to run a segment on the Tommy tower, after a local-color piece in the Times describes it as “a giant piece of inedible candy.” Like the lawn monument, these moments are patched together, and not entirely original.

The absent Tommy fulfills Cooper’s central role of the unknowable teen, a kind of stoned stand-in for the mysteries of youth, a boy whose interior life is inaccessible to adults. But this device succeeds when we’re given a protagonist whom we do get to know — as with “Guide’s” Dennis, defined both through the company he keeps and his vivid, shocking fantasy life. Unfortunately, in this already too-slim book (163 pages of large typeface), we learn very little about Tommy’s parents. What did Jim do with himself before he became “disabled”? What was Jim’s relationship with his wife before their son’s death left them estranged and perpetually exhausted? Jim describes the daily routine: “Bette pushes my errant wheelchair to the couch. She holds me by the belt loops, then slides my ass from the cushions into its more unstable seat. It’s hard for her because I used to be a horny, jogging, gym-addicted jock.” It’s a harsh, efficient description of their grim domestic scene. But the world of “God Jr.” has a void where all that sex and violence used to be: That high-stakes tension is gone, and the clock-punching and gaming of a middle-aged Everyman are no substitute.

Yet, there is innovation in “God Jr.” Take the fragmented, stoner-logic passage in which Jim imagines himself transformed into a pixelated bear within the world of Tommy’s video game. Suddenly, as the bear player, he can speak to the animated ferrets and magical talking plants and discover secret levels and treasures buried deep within the game. While much of the novel lacks the slur and pop of his typically teenage cast, Cooper finds in the game’s innermost dimensions a surreal, quasi-mystical new voice — as when one of the animals first speaks to Jim: “‘You’re Jim,’ says the ferret. ‘Father of Tommy. Uncertain bear. Liar. You want to know what I recall about you when you were your son. And maybe something else.’” Cooper finds a lyricism in the bizzarro video landscape: “We land squarely on a corrugated terrace. It’s smeared with buttery moss and some tiny stained-glass lamps that the bear recognizes as flowers. Two stylized paw prints, evidence of some larger bear or passing Yeti, face a gargantuan tropical plant that someone or something dressed in thrift-store castoffs like a scarecrow.”

Jim interrogates the animals about his son, eager to find significance in Tommy’s fixation with the game — he wasn’t just another high school burnout with a Nintendo habit, was he? The plant says that Tommy used to leave the game on “pause” for long stretches of time, more interested in staring at the screen than playing, and this induced in the fantastical creatures a sort of crisis:

“First, you need to understand something,” says the plant. “The bear is the bear. Your eyes are one degree livelier than the pattern on a teacup. You walk, you trot. You kill, you solve puzzles. There’s just not a lot to you … That said, I’ll tell you this. Tommy spent weeks and weeks right down there doing nothing … We began to speculate. Why is the bear still here? He had no answers to give us, so we thought about ourselves. Why are we still here? Theories abounded … [T]he questions got mystical … [T]he consensus here is that Tommy bear was God.”

Much like Jim’s bleak hope for a message hidden within his son’s average-teen behavior, the virtual animals see “God” in Tommy’s bored gaming breaks. Here “God Jr.” becomes recognizable as Cooper: An existential puzzle, the book is ultimately about surfaces, and the futile search for something meaningful underneath.

If this novel is not Cooper at his best, it’s an unavoidable step toward breaking out of the sensational corner he’s painted himself into. After all, how many great novels can someone write about raping and dismembering boys? As the cold and two-dimensional “The Sluts” proves, Cooper can find little more to mine from this terrain — he’s run that obsession into the ground. “God Jr.,” while slight, should be recognized as a bold move: One of our most fearless authors is struggling to see what’s left of his voice once the flash and gore have been peeled away. Unfortunately, he still has a long way to go.

Alex Mar is an editor at Rolling Stone.

50 shades of Shutterstock

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This week, for roughly the millionth time, E.L. James’ romance-bondage trilogy “50 Shades” nabs the No. 1, 2 and 3 spots on the New York Times bestseller lists. We don’t get it either. Every page of that book, which famously began as “Twilight” fan fiction, elicits a sigh of confusion and weird secondary embarrassment. The question is: Who would read this? (The answer is: Apparently everyone.) It’s the same baffled, helpless feeling we get when we sort through stock photos on a daily basis. Stock photos – which have been the subject of recent outstanding Internet satire – are used by this site, and many others, to illustrate our flood of content. Many are plain and simple, but a good portion are flat-out mind-blowing. Why did anyone think that photo was a good idea? It only made sense to join these forces. And so, we present to you passages from the most head-scratching bestseller of our time, illustrated with the assistance of inexplicable stock photography.

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Megaphone by Natalie Bakopoulos

Miracles happen, even in an Athens crippled by a garbage strike, to a young mother unsure of her ability to love

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Megaphone by Natalie Bakopoulos (Credit: iStockphoto/caracterdesign)

It’s the third week of the garbage strike and Athens has begun to smell. Bright-colored trash bags fill the curbs and alleyways, and we have learned to step over the rubbish and avoid the blocks that had become unnavigable. We know which stretches are particularly foul — a stretch along Mavili Square, or the entire top end of Monastiraki. Odos Athinas is a sea of trash, and Omonia is ghastly but we don’t go there anyway. May has gone from unseasonably cool to raging hot, and the garbage seems to be melting. In front of the museum it’s like yet another installation project. When I arrive each morning I want to wretch.

My 5-year-old son, Alekos, sits on the balcony of our apartment. Visible from there are pine trees and details of other people’s lives, audible are the sounds of morning, the birds above and voices below. Evenings, Alekos lies on the divan on the balcony in his pajamas, watching the moon. He is obsessed with it, and his father made him a playlist of all the Greek songs that mention it. When he was smaller he’d stare at the moon until he fell asleep.

This morning, though, Alekos lies flat on the ground, peering down through the slats of the railing, staring at the trash. Next to him is his iPad ­– a gift from his father, and yes, I know, but his father doesn’t live with us and what can you do?­ — and now he favors bad pop music like the older kids at school. So I’m surprised this morning when I hear the sounds of Elmo counting. He’s embarrassed by this favorite YouTube clip­­ – it’s for babies, he says ­­­­– but it comforts him. The tension these days is overwhelming.

Alekos looks up when he sees me, furrows his brow, and tells me if he were a deputy like his father, he’d force everyone to clean up the garbage. “And to make a new government,” he says.

I tell him that would be nice.

“At least I can fly,” he says. He is wearing the Spider-Man costume my sister brought him from the States.

I tell him Spider-Man jumps and leaps and sticks to things. He doesn’t fly. “Besides,” I quickly add, thinking of all the balconies around us. “You’re not Spider-Man.” Even I have wondered what it might be like to jump from one to the next. I smooth his light hair, which is growing long. “You need a haircut,” I say.

I hold out two polos, one white, one blue, so he feels he has a choice. He pulls the blue shirt over the costume, and I hope that his teachers aren’t too upset by this because I am too exhausted to argue with him.

Outside, the trash has piled up, and Alekos can’t get into the car from the curb. I tell him I’ll pull the car up so he can get in without pushing his way through the refuse. He wrinkles his nose at the smell. But when I get to the driver’s side, Alekos is no longer standing there.

Instead he is floating 12 feet above the curb, his Spider-Man-clad arms stretched out like wings.

Alekos,” is all I can say, “get down.” He swoops over to me, hovering just above my reach, and finally glides gracefully to my feet as if he has been practicing this move for months. Bending down to face him and gripping the straps of his backpack, I have the panicked feeling that if I let go he will fly away.

“How long has this been going on?” I whisper. “Tell me.”

One old man walks past us with his hands behind his back and says nothing. He barely notices us. Across the street a woman hurries along in heels, yelling into her phone. No one else is around.

Alekos shrugs, aloof, and looks away with those dark eyes, almost black, like his father’s. “I tried to tell you.”

“Does Babas know about this?” I ask, suddenly sure his father would keep this from me, just the way he failed to mention his girlfriend was staying the night, reading Alekos bedtime stories when he stayed there. Oh, the flying? I thought you knew?

“No,” Alekos says.

“Just at home, OK?” I say. I don’t want to alarm him, but I want to be firm.

He digs in his backpack and tells me he saw his father on the news that morning. This is one reason I don’t like him to watch television at all. For the rest of the drive, we’re quiet.

“I know I’m not Spider-Man,” he says finally, when we arrive.

“OK,” I say. “Do you fly at school?” I ask.

“No.” He looks at me in the rearview mirror, completely incredulous. “Nobody does.”

He gets out of the car and hurries off to meet some other kids, who admire his Spider-Man arms as if they are tattooed. I wait for him to turn around and wave but he doesn’t, and for a moment it seems his feet levitate off the ground. But maybe I am imagining it; he walks in, one foot after the other, like everyone else. I park at the metro station and take the train into the city center, turning up the ringer on my phone.

I call his father three times but get his voice mail. I text him to call me. He texts me an hour later — Ola kala? — and I trip over a split-open trash bag, as if these sidewalks weren’t already treacherous enough. I answer, Yes, everything’s fine. This will have to wait until we are face to face, which is not often.

We met when I was teaching art classes on Paros one summer. I soon got pregnant, and we didn’t get married, but I stayed in Greece. I think he still resents me for not marrying him. To be honest, I can’t even remember my reasons. It all seems like another lifetime, decades ago, when Athens felt proud and vibrant those few years after the Olympics.

A few more messages come from him but I’m busy and don’t answer. Then, when I’m outside the museum, finishing my installation, he shows up.

“You don’t call me three times in a row with no message,” he says, frustrated. “You barely call me at all, unless the kid is on fire.”

No, not fire, I think.

He surveys my project, one giant megaphone outside the  museum, the size of a kiosk, with cameras inside that will film street activity and project it onto a screen inside. Tiny figurines in various stages of undress shoot out from the megaphone, suspended by invisible wire. I’ve compiled old Greek footage of both celebrations and protests, which will air inside the museum, and the outdoor footage will be superimposed on those old clips. I wonder if anyone is inside now, watching us, or what we’re matched with: a hectic street scene, a political rally, a brilliant August moon?

“I like it,” he says, in English, in that supportive tone he uses when he doesn’t know what to say about my work but wants to convey he approves.

“Oh, stop it,” I say.

“And with the garbage,” he says. “A nice touch.”

And the two of us laugh, the first time we have laughed together in a long time, since before the elections, since before the crisis, probably not since Alekos was an infant and we marveled at every smile and uttered “word.” Suddenly I think I should have thought to make those tiny figures children, with wings. I wonder why I didn’t think of it before, why it always takes the manifestation of something so crazy to make me realize something so simple.

“Let me take you for a coffee,” he says, “or something stronger? We can sit outside, where it’s quiet.” The trash stench is so bad that everyone sits inside, smoking.

“You have time for that?” I ask, knowing he doesn’t. I can hear his phone buzzing in his pocket. “I should keep working.”

One night, right before these last elections, he came to pick Alekos up and he kissed me when Alekos went to grab his toys. “Not yet,” I said. My attempt at self-preservation while the rest of the country implodes. It’s hard enough just to be friends.

“OK,” he said then. “We’ll get there, one day.”

Now, I lean into him a moment. Together we survey what I’ve made. I want to tell him, Our son can fly. I want to tell him, Stay.

“Are we there yet,” he says quietly, distantly, not as question but statement, and he rests his chin on my head and looks out into the street: the sleepy shops, the political posters pasted over the boarded-up kiosks, the hot afternoon sun beating down on it all. “Are we?”

And then my phone is ringing­­ — it’s the school office — and I know of course what has happened. I imagine Alekos flying around his classroom like an angry bee, out into the schoolyard, beyond the trash, beyond the protests and our land in limbo. Or maybe he is more relaxed, gliding effortlessly the way I fly in my dreams, his superhero costume and sandy hair glowing in the afternoon sun, until he finds us here, his parents who don’t know where we are or where we’re going, and taking us up with him, catapulting us into the vast unknown. Our images would flicker on the screen inside, soaring above that old footage of our shattered, magnificent city.

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Natalie Bakopoulos's first novel, "The Green Shore," will be published by Simon & Schuster in June 2012. Her work has appeared in Tin House, Ninth Letter, Granta Online, and The O. Henry Prize Stories 2010, and she is a contributing editor for the online journal Fiction Writers Review.

Almost by Chris Pavone

She never thought of herself as ambitious, until motherhood and career collided in one horrifying hospital ride

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It’s just before dawn when Isabel puts the final page down on the fat stack of paper that sits on the rumpled bedspread, next to an overflowing crystal ashtray and a crumpled soft-pack of cigarettes. She’d tried Wellbutrin and Xanax; she’d used patches and gum. In the end, the only thing that made her quit smoking was being pregnant.

But then, after everything, she couldn’t help but start up again. At first it was just a single cigarette per day, or two. Then it became a few, and within months she was back to full-throttle. Over the past couple of years, she’s tried to quit a few times, but not seriously. She anticipates — she accepts — failure. Because she doesn’t want to quit, not really. She wants instead to try, and fail.

Isabel picks up the manuscript with both hands, flips it over, and uses her thumbs to align the pages. She takes a deep breath, lets out a long sigh.

Another night lying in bed, working. She’d fallen asleep at 11, then woke sometime after 2, her mind unquiet. But it wasn’t until 3 that she admitted she was awake. She then picked up a manuscript and a pencil, and started working, page after page, all through the desperate hours. Vaguely reminiscent of those days when Nicky was an infant, in the middle of the night, sleep-deprived, awake in a dormant world. The small hours when a blanket of quiet smothers the city, but through the moth-eaten holes there’s the occasional lowing of a railroad in New Jersey, the distant Dopplered wail of an ambulance siren. Then the inevitable thump of the newspaper on the doormat, the end of the idea of night, even though it’s still dark out.

She stares across the room, off into the black nothingness of the picture window on the opposite wall, its severe surface barely softened by the half-drawn shades, an aggressive void invading the serene cocoon of her bedroom. The room is barely lit by a small bullet-shaped reading sconce mounted over the headboard, aiming a beam of light directly at the top of her head, creating a halo in the reflection in the window. An angel. Except she’s not.

Isabel shuffles into the dark hall, flips the light switch. She turns on the kitchen lights, and the coffee — switched from auto-on, which is set to start brewing an hour from now, to on — and the small television on the counter. Filling the lonely apartment with humming electronic life.

The coffee machine hisses and sputters, big plops falling into the tempered glass. She watches the contraption’s clock, changing from 5:48 to 5:49. Grabs the plastic handle of the carafe and fills the mug with hot, viscous, bitter, bracing caffeination. She takes a small sip, then a larger one.

She walks down the hall, lined with the photographs that she’d unearthed four years ago, when she was moving out of her matrimonial apartment, into this single-woman space in a new neighborhood, far from the painful memories of her home — of her life — downtown, where she’d been running into too many mothers, often with their children. Women she’d known from the playgrounds and the toy stores and the mommy-and-me music classes, from the gyms and grocers and coffee shops, from preschool drop-off and the waiting room at the pediatrician’s. All those other little children growing older, getting bigger.

So she’d bought herself a one-bedroom in an uptown full-service building, the type of apartment that a woman chooses when she reconciles herself that she’s not going to be living with another human being, probably forever. That she’s making her loneliness comfortable. Palliative care.

She lined this nice new hallway with framed photos. There she is, herself, a smiling little toddler. And with her mother on the first day of second grade. At college graduation with her two best friends. There are her grandparents, at the final family reunion before they both died, within weeks of each other. Isabel in a big white dress, aglow, in the middle of the panoramic-lens group shot. A much smaller print, lying in a hospital bed, beaming at Nicky in her arms, tiny and red and angry in his swaddling blanket and blue cap. A grainy shot of herself onstage in a little black dress, accepting an award, beaming again, but not as wide. Some joys aren’t as joyous as others.

It was more than possible — it was inevitable — to blame herself, her ambition, even though she’d never thought of herself as especially ambitious. But everyone has important moments, in any job, at any level of ambition. In the Supreme Court or a fourth-grade classroom, on an assembly line or a fishing boat, there are crucial days.

For Isabel the literary agent, this day was dominated by an auction she was running for a hotly anticipated second novel, whose author needed a lot of hand-holding, and whose bidders kept increasing their offers every half-hour, from mid-five figures to high-sixes in the course of the day. This lucrative 9-to-6 was followed by a 7 o’clock black-tie that included an honor for, and an interminable speech by, a different author of hers. So this frantic day, it featured a wardrobe change. And the evening portion was just as important work as the daytime; just because there was liquor and food and fancy dress didn’t mean it wasn’t work.

The nanny called a couple times during Isabel’s 16 hours at work, worrying that Nicky’s cold or flu or whatever was getting worse. Dave was away on a business trip, and Isabel didn’t want Lupe to be the one to go to the doctor with Nicky; the nanny’s English would be generously described as weak, and sometimes that mattered. So Isabel made an appointment for first thing the next morning. Anyone would’ve done the same thing.

Isabel returned home after midnight, exhausted. She thanked Lupe and sent her home in a taxi, and let her cocktail dress fall to the floor, and collapsed into bed.

She was awakened at dawn by the screaming. Nicky was burning up, 106. She rushed downstairs with the boy in her arms, and ran around the block, panting and desperate, until she found a taxi.  “Don’t worry, Sweetie,” she said. “We’ll be at the doctor’s in a minute.” The hospital was only a mile away.

The taxi peeled away from the curb, the eerie blue light washing over the dingy white garbage trucks, the Mexican kids swabbing down the sidewalks in front of all-night delis, the street-cart vendors positioning their pastries in front of office buildings, the joggers with reflective stripes down their shorts, the normal business of a city’s day starting, coming to life.

“Are we there yet?” Nicky asked, as he had so many times. From the back seat of the shiny SUV that was cleaned every week by the guys in the garage, on their way out to the weekend house in East Hampton, back when her life looked like something to be envied. He had said it on the way to visit Dave’s parents in Oyster Bay, or hers upstate in the Hudson Valley. While heading to Vermont, for a ski weekend; to Cape Cod, to visit friends; to the Bronx Zoo and the Brooklyn Aquarium, Yankee Stadium and Citi Field. It was something the little boy asked, all the time.

But this was the last time.

In the back of the moldy-smelling taxi she pushed the fever-damp hair off her son’s hot forehead. “Nearly,” she said. He shut his eyes, and then slipped silently into a coma, there on the slippery silver vinyl seat of the taxi.

An hour later, Nicky was dead. A supervirus, said the young doctor, who had been up all night, up for who knows how long, working; he was tired and frustrated, and perhaps not as tactful as he could’ve been.

At the end of the hall Isabel stops at the spotlit photograph, a small black-and-white in the center of a vast expanse of stark white matting. A little boy, her baby, laughing on a rocky beach, running out of gentle surf, holding a little toy hammer. Isabel reaches her hand to her lips, plants a kiss on her fingers, and transfers the kiss to the little boy. As she does every morning.

There was, the doctor added, almost nothing she could’ve done. Almost.

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Memorial Day fiction: Are we there yet?

Salon exclusive: At the start of the summer fiction season, new stories from Chris Pavone and Natalie Bakopoulos

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Memorial Day fiction: Are we there yet? (Credit: iStockphoto/caracterdesign)

“Are we there yet?”

It’s a dreaded sentence. When it’s spoken by an anxious child from the back seat, it’s enough to make stressed-out parents wish they’d never taken a family vacation in the first place. And even if it’s delivered as a sing-songy punch line, from an impatient partner or spouse on a long road trip, it’s an irritating eye-roller of a joke.

So this Memorial Day weekend — the unofficial start of the summer vacation season, and therefore the summer fiction season — we asked two novelists to reclaim the sentence in a new and adult context. For our latest fiction project, there was only one simple rule: Each story had to include the line “Are we there yet?” in a fresh and surprising way.

Our authors are two people you should be taking to the beach with you this summer. Chris Pavone is the author of “The Expats,” the New York Times best-selling thriller with more satisfying twists than the Pacific Coast Highway. Natalie Bakopoulos is the author of “The Green Shore,” one of 2012′s most anticipated debut novels, a beautiful family drama that is set during another Greek crisis — the 1967 military coup.

To read the stories, just follow the links below:

“Megaphone” by Natalie Bakopoulos

“Almost” by Chris Pavone

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David Daley is the senior culture editor of Salon.

“Frankenstein” remixed

This masterful new adaptation of Mary Shelley's classic novel may be the best interactive fiction yet

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This originally appeared on The Chimerist, a site devoted to the intersection of art, stories, and technology.

Whatever interactive fiction is (and we’re still figuring that out) it suffers from all the problems of traditional fiction and then some. The vast majority of novels and short stories aren’t much good, but when a branching fiction — along the lines of the old “Choose Your Own Adventure” children’s books — fails to engage, the first impulse is to blame the form rather than the content. Let “Frankenstein,” just released by Inkle Studios and Profile Books, serve as a reproach to that reflex. The app is a creative, subtle and sensitive adaptation of Mary Shelley’s classic novella, and it has singlehandedly renewed this critic’s hopes for interactive fiction.

What this “Frankenstein” isn’t is a replication of the source text with the addition of a lot of digital doohickeys like sound effects and illustrations that animate when tapped. The app is all about the text, even if it is beautifully framed by period art and anatomical illustrations. The reader is presented with a screenful of narration and then offered one or more responses to it. The preferred response, when tapped, delivers up another screen of text. (In an absurdly pleasing visual touch, these appear as sheets of paper fasted together by straight pins.) According to the press materials, the reader’s responses will shape the way the narrative is presented, although not to the degree of substantively changing the plot.

This is an important point. The pleasure of storytelling lies in the dynamic between the surprising and the inevitable. The reader wants to feel the story is going somewhere, that its events follow from each other in meaningful, but not too obvious ways. When a story can go anywhere, it feels meaningless. In Mary Shelley’s novella, which is saturated with the Western tradition of the tragedy, Viktor Frankenstein’s character is such that he must create a monster, and the monster’s body is such that he can never belong among human beings however much he yearns to. A “Frankenstein” that ended with either misfit finding a comfortable place in the world would be a travesty.

But that doesn’t mean the reader doesn’t long for the story to unfold otherwise; that’s the nature of tragedy. The great insight that writer Dave Morris brings to this adaptation of the novel is that while a reader cannot significantly change the outcome of the story, the interactive element can change the shading and flavor of the tale. It can be mournful and reflective or action-packed. The creature and his creator can show greater or lesser ambivalence about their own behaviors. The ambiguity of both figures is baked into Mary Shelley’s novella, and while Morris has nearly doubled the word count of the original, this mostly amounts to playing up or down what’s already there.

Morris — a novelist who has written graphic novels, games and, yes, Choose-Your-Own-Adventure stories for kids — has changed the original text in other ways, as well. (Let’s take a moment here to point out to all future narrative app developers that hiring a real writer who actually knows what he or she is doing is totally worth it.) He’s moved the setting to revolutionary France, a choice that shows shrewd understanding of the idealistic political climate that affected Shelley’s thinking; the new Republic is its own kind of Frankenstein’s monster. He’s also eliminated much of the 19th-century framing of the tale and converted it into two present-tense narrations. One is Frankenstein’s dialogue with either himself or a (possibly imaginary) companion. The other is a second-person account of the monster’s first weeks of life as it spies on a family of dispossessed French nobility and has the chance to observe the loving relationships it can never enjoy itself.

Morris presents the reader with choices I’ve not encountered in other interactive fictions. Is humanity mostly good, or mostly evil? Does the most recent development make you (the monster) feel hope or despair? Is the revolution the dawn of a brave new world or a descent into chaos and barbarity? While I’m usually skeptical that present-tense narration increases the “immediacy” of a story, in this case, it really does work, particularly in the sections concerning the monster. Depending on your own outlook, you may urge him to keep trying to connect with humanity, or promptly forward him on to homicidal rage.

In either case, the narrative is shaped not by the reader deciding to turn left or right, to go down into the cellar or to get out of the house — the usual actions offered on the choose-your-own menu. Instead, the options have more to do with personality and interpretation, beliefs and ideas. As a result of the reader’s choices, the characters seem more like him- or herself, with a concurrent ratcheting up of emotional investment. To my surprise, I found myself more moved by this adaptation of the Shelley novel than I have been by the source text. (Although the app does include the original if you want to compare and contrast.) This is the only interactive fiction I’ve ever read with that quintessential, old-fashioned readerly avidity: the hunger to know what happens next. Of course, I already knew, but that didn’t matter at all.

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Laura Miller

Laura Miller is a senior writer for Salon. She is the author of "The Magician's Book: A Skeptic's Adventures in Narnia" and has a Web site, magiciansbook.com.

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