Fiction
Mistress of horror
With her creepy, suspenseful stories of desperate people in tight situations, Rachel Ingalls could be the next Patricia Highsmith.
If Patricia Highsmith had had the chance — and the inclination — to rewrite “The Notebook,” Nicholas Sparks’ sentimental story of star-crossed young lovers, I think she would have come up with something much like the first story in Rachel Ingalls’ haunting new collection, “Times Like These.” Here’s the Nicholas Sparks: As in his bestselling romance, Ingalls’ “Last Act: The Madhouse” features two teenage lovers who find their parents standing between them. William and Jean break the rules, have sex and, inevitably, conceive a child. William wants to marry Jean and have a family. But his parents aren’t so keen on the idea of their well-bred son “marrying down.” When William’s mother asks her son to take some time apart from Jean to think about what he really wants to do, he agrees, if only to get her off his back.
During William and Jean’s separation, the two write each other letters and leave them in a secret place for retrieval. But it’s not secret enough. William’s mother intercepts the letters (as Allie’s mother does in “The Notebook”). Even worse than withholding or destroying them, William’s mother replaces their letters with new ones, in forged handwriting, so that both teenagers wind up so confused and betrayed they never speak to one another again.
Of course, “The Notebook” ends happily. “Last Act: The Madhouse” lives up to its title, and in its last act grows creepier and sadder. Here’s where Highsmith takes over.
Years later, after his parents have died, William returns to his childhood home. After discovering the letters Jean intended for him, he “went out of his mind … He slashed all the paintings in the house, even the ones he has known from his childhood and had loved most … He tore up all the photographs of himself and his parents, set fire to the Anatolian rug, and walked out of the room while it was still smoldering. He took his father’s bird guns and began to shoot into the walls, sideboards, ceilings and stairs.” Days later, he regains his composure, but never his wits, and sets out to look for Jean.
In the story’s second half, on a tip from Jean’s family and with the aid of a private investigator, William tours various mental institutions, looking for the girl he had loved all those years before.
The search is not futile — William does find a girl — but remember: This is not “The Notebook.” Like Highsmith, Ingalls gets at how obsessive love ruins people’s ability to reason; like Highsmith, Ingalls spins suspense out of nothing more than real life.
Ingalls’ stories are all grounded in human behavior and emotion. (In this collection, they’re also riddled with typos, which is a real shame. A writer this good deserves a better editor.) In “Times Like These,” there’s nothing supernatural; the tension hinges instead on that moment where, if one decision had been made differently, or an invitation had not been extended, or a word had not been uttered, disaster might have been averted. Ingalls puts her characters in trying, even terrifying, situations so that we can watch them think and puzzle their way out.
Some become monsters, others withdraw. In the novella-length “The Veterans,” an ill-mannered and possibly mentally disturbed vet named Sherman seeks out Franklin, the man who saved his life in the war, and becomes an unwelcome, potentially dangerous houseguest in Franklin’s cozy home. In the story “Somewhere Else,” a couple sets off on a much-needed European vacation, but they find themselves with a handful of others on an old-fashioned horse-drawn carriage ride that never ends. And in the final story, “No Love Lost,” a family returns to its burned-out home after a terrible war. Shortages are so severe in their town that neighbors are killing each other for scraps of food or fabric. Refugees from other towns, also looking for sustenance, are simply tossed into the quarry, and little children can hear their screams rising up from below.
Also like Highsmith, Rachel Ingalls has spent her adult life in Europe, and is known better in her adoptive country (England) than in her native. I only hope that Americans discover her before too long. It wasn’t until after Patricia Highsmith’s death — and the smash hit film version of “The Talented Mr. Ripley” — that Americans gave her her due. We shouldn’t make the same mistake twice.
Hillary Frey is the Books editor at Salon. More Hillary Frey.
50 shades of Shutterstock
Slide show: Everyone's favorite light-bondage bestseller illustrated by inexplicable stock photography SLIDE SHOW
This week, for roughly the millionth time, E.L. James’ romance-bondage trilogy “50 Shades” nabs the No. 1, 2 and 3 spots on the New York Times bestseller lists. We don’t get it either. Every page of that book, which famously began as “Twilight” fan fiction, elicits a sigh of confusion and weird secondary embarrassment. The question is: Who would read this? (The answer is: Apparently everyone.) It’s the same baffled, helpless feeling we get when we sort through stock photos on a daily basis. Stock photos – which have been the subject of recent outstanding Internet satire – are used by this site, and many others, to illustrate our flood of content. Many are plain and simple, but a good portion are flat-out mind-blowing. Why did anyone think that photo was a good idea? It only made sense to join these forces. And so, we present to you passages from the most head-scratching bestseller of our time, illustrated with the assistance of inexplicable stock photography.
Megaphone by Natalie Bakopoulos
Miracles happen, even in an Athens crippled by a garbage strike, to a young mother unsure of her ability to love
(Credit: iStockphoto/caracterdesign) It’s the third week of the garbage strike and Athens has begun to smell. Bright-colored trash bags fill the curbs and alleyways, and we have learned to step over the rubbish and avoid the blocks that had become unnavigable. We know which stretches are particularly foul — a stretch along Mavili Square, or the entire top end of Monastiraki. Odos Athinas is a sea of trash, and Omonia is ghastly but we don’t go there anyway. May has gone from unseasonably cool to raging hot, and the garbage seems to be melting. In front of the museum it’s like yet another installation project. When I arrive each morning I want to wretch.
Continue Reading CloseNatalie Bakopoulos's first novel, "The Green Shore," will be published by Simon & Schuster in June 2012. Her work has appeared in Tin House, Ninth Letter, Granta Online, and The O. Henry Prize Stories 2010, and she is a contributing editor for the online journal Fiction Writers Review. More Natalie Bakopoulos.
Almost by Chris Pavone
She never thought of herself as ambitious, until motherhood and career collided in one horrifying hospital ride
(Credit: iStockphoto/caracterdesign) It’s just before dawn when Isabel puts the final page down on the fat stack of paper that sits on the rumpled bedspread, next to an overflowing crystal ashtray and a crumpled soft-pack of cigarettes. She’d tried Wellbutrin and Xanax; she’d used patches and gum. In the end, the only thing that made her quit smoking was being pregnant.
But then, after everything, she couldn’t help but start up again. At first it was just a single cigarette per day, or two. Then it became a few, and within months she was back to full-throttle. Over the past couple of years, she’s tried to quit a few times, but not seriously. She anticipates — she accepts — failure. Because she doesn’t want to quit, not really. She wants instead to try, and fail.
Continue Reading CloseMemorial Day fiction: Are we there yet?
Salon exclusive: At the start of the summer fiction season, new stories from Chris Pavone and Natalie Bakopoulos
(Credit: iStockphoto/caracterdesign) “Are we there yet?”
It’s a dreaded sentence. When it’s spoken by an anxious child from the back seat, it’s enough to make stressed-out parents wish they’d never taken a family vacation in the first place. And even if it’s delivered as a sing-songy punch line, from an impatient partner or spouse on a long road trip, it’s an irritating eye-roller of a joke.
So this Memorial Day weekend — the unofficial start of the summer vacation season, and therefore the summer fiction season — we asked two novelists to reclaim the sentence in a new and adult context. For our latest fiction project, there was only one simple rule: Each story had to include the line “Are we there yet?” in a fresh and surprising way.
Continue Reading CloseDavid Daley is the senior culture editor of Salon. More David Daley.
“Frankenstein” remixed
This masterful new adaptation of Mary Shelley's classic novel may be the best interactive fiction yet
Whatever interactive fiction is (and we’re still figuring that out) it suffers from all the problems of traditional fiction and then some. The vast majority of novels and short stories aren’t much good, but when a branching fiction — along the lines of the old “Choose Your Own Adventure” children’s books — fails to engage, the first impulse is to blame the form rather than the content. Let “Frankenstein,” just released by Inkle Studios and Profile Books, serve as a reproach to that reflex. The app is a creative, subtle and sensitive adaptation of Mary Shelley’s classic novella, and it has singlehandedly renewed this critic’s hopes for interactive fiction.
Laura Miller is a senior writer for Salon. She is the author of "The Magician's Book: A Skeptic's Adventures in Narnia" and has a Web site, magiciansbook.com. More Laura Miller.
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