Fiction
“On Chesil Beach”
Two virgins face down fear and disgust on their wedding night in Ian McEwan's slender new novel.
Ian McEwan‘s recent work has been a master class on the elasticity of time in fiction. The first half of 2002′s “Atonement” unfolds, in voluptuous and horrifying deliberation, with the disastrous events of a fateful summer day in 1935, while “Saturday” (2006) transpires on Feb. 15, 2003, in the shadow of a giant antiwar demonstration. His latest novel, “On Chesil Beach,” goes this life-in-a-day conceit one better. Up until the last few pages, the frame of reference is a single evening, from dinner till dawn, in the lives of two nice — even boringly nice — people, “polite to a fault”: Florence, an aspiring violinist, and Edward, a university grad originally from the sticks with budding authorial ambitions.
It’s not just any night, but Florence and Edward’s wedding night; and not just any wedding night, but one shared between two virgins. (The Lennon-Ono title would have been snappier than “On Chesil Beach,” which, at least to the American ear, sets up lingering associations to the codgerfest “On Golden Pond.”) Slim enough to gulp down in one sitting, “On Chesil Beach” could double as an effective pamphlet on the benefits of premarital couples counseling.
The setting is an English seaside hotel in 1962 — one year, as we know, before Philip Larkin’s annus mirabilis when “sexual intercourse began” for the poet (“Between the end of the “Chatterley” ban/And the Beatles’ first LP”). Florence and Edward first meet at a ban-the-bomb rally, but during their year of courtship, physical contact has been a matter of slow conquest: “The evening in the cinema at a showing of ‘A Taste of Honey’ when he took her hand and plunged it between his legs set the process back weeks.”
Indeed, it is Edward’s certainty of the impossibility of sex out of wedlock that spurs him to pop the question. In love with Edward, Florence understands the course that their affections should take, and “in optimistic moments she tried to convince herself that she suffered from no more than a heightened form of squeamishness,” yet she finds it difficult to shake her distaste and dreads the impending mattress matters. Her new husband is, of course, eager to consummate the union, but in truth both are petrified by their inexperience, each entertaining the notion that the other will have a sense of how to proceed with the actual mechanics of the deed.
In lieu of plot, McEwan applies a fine brush to character. He toggles between the tensions of the night in question and his protagonists’ lives up to this point, apart and together. Though both have attended college, they are products of subtly different classes. Rougher-edged Edward — he’s an occasional brawler — is the son of a primary school headmaster and a mother left brain-damaged as a result of a senseless accident. His home is in perpetual disarray, whereas Florence’s house is grand enough that Edward gets his own room when he comes to stay. Her father manufactures scientific equipment, and her mother — in sharp contrast to Edward’s invalid mom — is a philosophy professor. Yet both feel stifled by their families; in one of the book’s more delicate constructions, McEwan puts them on a gentle collision course as both wander away from home one afternoon and meet for the first time.
The familiar, alas, is the one thing that might help them on their wedding night. How to get back to their previous amiability? The fear of what’s to come, so to speak, is overwhelming. During and after a grandly presented but singularly unappetizing dinner (“slices of long-ago roasted beef in a thickened gray, soft-boiled vegetables, and potatoes of a bluish hue”), the two flounder in silence, descending into a sort of prisoner’s dilemma. They lack the vocabulary. Anything they can think to say is inadequate to their situation, to the quelling of opening-night jitters; the twist is that silence is somehow worse. When Edward manages to say, “I’m so happy here with you,” and Florence responds with “I’m so happy too,” the mirroring sentences show that they’re both trapped, on an island the size of a bed, in an ocean the size of a life. All their previous conversations cannot help them, and with frightening swiftness everything is on the verge of ruin.
“English is a beautiful language, full of misunderstandings,” says Robert, the sinister presence in McEwan’s second novel, “The Comfort of Strangers.” Published over a quarter-century ago, “Comfort” is roughly the same length as “Chesil” and makes for a tantalizing precursor. Mary and Colin are travelers in an unnamed city, where every turn is the wrong one and irritation runs high. After one too many encounters with Robert and his odd wife, Caroline, the couple banter to keep the dread at bay, but in vain: What’s left is unspeakable. Though “Comfort’s” elegantly (or inhumanely) sustained tone of menace couldn’t be more different from “Chesil’s” tear-damp saga of failure, both are snapshots of couples free-falling into terror. The physical S/M of the first book finds a counterpart in the unintended emotional cruelties of the latter.
“Comfort” takes place in the equivalent of a Giorgio de Chirico painting, all harsh sun and enigmatic corners, a place of erasure and anonymity. “On Chesil Beach” is, by contrast, meticulous in its specificity of time and place. The historical coordinates aren’t simply important, but indeed are integral, to the success of McEwan’s project. The tension is between what happened and how it has been interpreted — something he did to dramatic effect in “Atonement.” The first two sentences of “Chesil” immediately display a shifting of tense: “They were young, educated, and both virgins on this, their wedding night, and they lived in a time when a conversation about sexual difficulties was plainly impossible. But it is never easy.” They were; they lived; it is. Who, exactly, is telling the story — and when?
Sometimes the constant contextualizing is welcome (“This was not a good moment in the history of English cuisine”); occasionally it gets fuzzy (“How did they meet, and why were these lovers in a modern age so timid and innocent?”) or keeps the reader at arm’s length, as though siphoned from a textbook: “In the early nineteen fifties, [Edward's father's] homecoming routines were hardly typical of a professional man.”
But after “On Chesil Beach” climaxes, the masterfully modulated denouement fast-forwards through the decades to come to our present day — and prods us to consider what this book really is. For Edward’s early pipe dream was to write “a series of short biographies … of semi-obscure figures who lived close to the center of important historical events.” Sir Robert Carey, anyone? Another possible subject: A 14th century “flagellant Messiah” named Konrad Schmid. “As Edward saw it, each history would be no longer than 200 pages and would be published, with illustrations, by Penguin Books, and perhaps when the series was complete it could be available in a special boxed set.”
Could it be that the little-big book in our hands — which totals 200 pages on the nose — is written by Edward, the historian at last, his subject none other than himself?
Ed Park is a founding editor of The Believer. More Ed Park.
50 shades of Shutterstock
Slide show: Everyone's favorite light-bondage bestseller illustrated by inexplicable stock photography SLIDE SHOW
This week, for roughly the millionth time, E.L. James’ romance-bondage trilogy “50 Shades” nabs the No. 1, 2 and 3 spots on the New York Times bestseller lists. We don’t get it either. Every page of that book, which famously began as “Twilight” fan fiction, elicits a sigh of confusion and weird secondary embarrassment. The question is: Who would read this? (The answer is: Apparently everyone.) It’s the same baffled, helpless feeling we get when we sort through stock photos on a daily basis. Stock photos – which have been the subject of recent outstanding Internet satire – are used by this site, and many others, to illustrate our flood of content. Many are plain and simple, but a good portion are flat-out mind-blowing. Why did anyone think that photo was a good idea? It only made sense to join these forces. And so, we present to you passages from the most head-scratching bestseller of our time, illustrated with the assistance of inexplicable stock photography.
Megaphone by Natalie Bakopoulos
Miracles happen, even in an Athens crippled by a garbage strike, to a young mother unsure of her ability to love
(Credit: iStockphoto/caracterdesign) It’s the third week of the garbage strike and Athens has begun to smell. Bright-colored trash bags fill the curbs and alleyways, and we have learned to step over the rubbish and avoid the blocks that had become unnavigable. We know which stretches are particularly foul — a stretch along Mavili Square, or the entire top end of Monastiraki. Odos Athinas is a sea of trash, and Omonia is ghastly but we don’t go there anyway. May has gone from unseasonably cool to raging hot, and the garbage seems to be melting. In front of the museum it’s like yet another installation project. When I arrive each morning I want to wretch.
Continue Reading CloseNatalie Bakopoulos's first novel, "The Green Shore," will be published by Simon & Schuster in June 2012. Her work has appeared in Tin House, Ninth Letter, Granta Online, and The O. Henry Prize Stories 2010, and she is a contributing editor for the online journal Fiction Writers Review. More Natalie Bakopoulos.
Almost by Chris Pavone
She never thought of herself as ambitious, until motherhood and career collided in one horrifying hospital ride
(Credit: iStockphoto/caracterdesign) It’s just before dawn when Isabel puts the final page down on the fat stack of paper that sits on the rumpled bedspread, next to an overflowing crystal ashtray and a crumpled soft-pack of cigarettes. She’d tried Wellbutrin and Xanax; she’d used patches and gum. In the end, the only thing that made her quit smoking was being pregnant.
But then, after everything, she couldn’t help but start up again. At first it was just a single cigarette per day, or two. Then it became a few, and within months she was back to full-throttle. Over the past couple of years, she’s tried to quit a few times, but not seriously. She anticipates — she accepts — failure. Because she doesn’t want to quit, not really. She wants instead to try, and fail.
Continue Reading CloseMemorial Day fiction: Are we there yet?
Salon exclusive: At the start of the summer fiction season, new stories from Chris Pavone and Natalie Bakopoulos
(Credit: iStockphoto/caracterdesign) “Are we there yet?”
It’s a dreaded sentence. When it’s spoken by an anxious child from the back seat, it’s enough to make stressed-out parents wish they’d never taken a family vacation in the first place. And even if it’s delivered as a sing-songy punch line, from an impatient partner or spouse on a long road trip, it’s an irritating eye-roller of a joke.
So this Memorial Day weekend — the unofficial start of the summer vacation season, and therefore the summer fiction season — we asked two novelists to reclaim the sentence in a new and adult context. For our latest fiction project, there was only one simple rule: Each story had to include the line “Are we there yet?” in a fresh and surprising way.
Continue Reading CloseDavid Daley is the senior culture editor of Salon. More David Daley.
“Frankenstein” remixed
This masterful new adaptation of Mary Shelley's classic novel may be the best interactive fiction yet
Whatever interactive fiction is (and we’re still figuring that out) it suffers from all the problems of traditional fiction and then some. The vast majority of novels and short stories aren’t much good, but when a branching fiction — along the lines of the old “Choose Your Own Adventure” children’s books — fails to engage, the first impulse is to blame the form rather than the content. Let “Frankenstein,” just released by Inkle Studios and Profile Books, serve as a reproach to that reflex. The app is a creative, subtle and sensitive adaptation of Mary Shelley’s classic novella, and it has singlehandedly renewed this critic’s hopes for interactive fiction.
Laura Miller is a senior writer for Salon. She is the author of "The Magician's Book: A Skeptic's Adventures in Narnia" and has a Web site, magiciansbook.com. More Laura Miller.
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